final blog

My strengths in my writing skill for this term would have to be my creativity and organization. Writing essays where I can just write whatever was in my mind were my strength. For example, my trip to Cuba essay was easy for me to write just because I didn’t have to do any research on it and it was something that I have already done, therefore I was able to really get into details with it. My organization puts my essays in place, I personally like using chronological order it makes the essay easier to follow well in my eyes it does. I believe that my strengths have helped me write the essays that we’ve written in class.
My weakness without a doubt would have to be my grammar. I’m sure as we speak my grammar is not looking as great as it should. I’m not ashamed of my weakness it just makes me work harder, and therefore in the end I will be better at it. Practice makes perfect, I know so cliché but it is fact practice does make perfect, and thanks to Prof. Bonaparte my grammar has improved since I’ve been here. The practices for which she has given us with comma splices and run on sentences really helped me out in writing my last few essays. Although I do need more practice, the little bit I did get can help me move on further with my essay writing. Of course I can later on continue to practice until I can say to myself, I can do this.
All in all, my strengths and weaknesses make my essay unique and at times a bit filled with errors. But that is fine by me it just ensures me that I need to work harder on that particular subject and push myself to the limit to achieve the goal of writing a well written essay.

blog # 3

What would you do? When would you do it? Where would you do it, and why?

I would be the worlds greatest super villain, my powers would be the ability to fly and teleport. The ability to be able to control anything and anyone with my mind. Lastly, the ability to control nature. I will be unstoppable.
This will all happen after the year 2030, once the big radioactive meteor lands on earth and destroys everything, that's when i will receive my awesome powers. Only a few survived those that did were mutated to have to superpowers, they all joined my clan of super villains. But of course none had powers as great as mine, that's why i am their leader. In the process my whole body had change from my hair turning a bright red to my height going from 5'4 to 6'0 it excited me knowing that i had all this power. but now with the Earth destroyed we had to find another place to call home, so my super villains and I built a rocket ship with what ever materials where left laying around what little bit of earth was left behind.
Our destination was mars, why mars you ask well it is the most similar to earth and i can create plant life and build my own plant. Being that we were all mutants we were able to breath on mars. It took us 1000 years to re build mars to accommodate our needs, but now that it is built we can continue our plan to not take over the world, but to take over the universe.
A couple of hours passed by when i sensed something really powerful approaching us, i used my excellent vision to spot out what it was, it was survivors from earth could they be humans or mutants like the rest of us on this plant. They arrived and within seconds all i can hear where the voices of my fellow villains screaming! They were being killed, those weren't humans they were superheros. With my super powers i killed a huge majority of them but i was not strong enough for my weakness; white chocolate. I can feel my powers draining as i just stood there, i cant believe it i thought we were the only survivors those super heroes had this planed out for 1000 years, I'm almost drained clean. Done, my powers are gone, oh no i cant breathe.....

“Avedon Fashion” 1944—2000
May 20, 2009 – 8:37 am
Posted in Darren Firth
Tagged Avedon, Celebrity, ICP, Photography


Richard Avedon (1923–2004)

So I had a long night last night, drinking and partying coming to work was not on my list of things i wanted to do that day. Having this hangover is definetly not making my job at the studio any easier. It feels like theres someone in my head yelling, "Help!!!!! make the room stop spinning." When is this photo shoot going to be over i just want to be home cuddled up with my doggy, sparky.

Theres throw up on my Channel dress, oh my what am i going to tell the designer. Im just going to hide it, and say it was Linda; that tramp. Maybe this time ill be the favorite and not her, i can hear her now, "oh no thats not my dress, i didnt do it," and the designer would say, "You are fired, and you would never work with Channel again!." That would make my day.

Finally the day is over, Linda got what she deserved, no one messes with me and my boyfriend and gets away with it. My photos look hot, and even with a hangover i can be fierce. Americas Next Top Model watch out here comes Roxanne.

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First blog, 3 topics

1.) Why I pick my 3 topics.
-Travel
-Music
-Food Nutrition

My reason for picking travel as one of my topics is. I enjoy travling and it is a fun way to meet new people and their cultures. Music has always been a passion of mine i enjoy singing and listening to music. The arts are slowly being diminished and i believe we should support the Arts like http://blog.artsusa.org/ states. A healthy life includes having a healthy appetite, and thats where food nutrition steps in. I want to be a nutritionist so learning everything about nutrition is crucial.

2.)Why should the class care about my topics?

Travling is a fun way to learn and educate others. And with the economy the way it is i know its hard to travel but accoding to http://www.mint.com/blog/finance-core/why-you-should-travel-now/. You can still travel to places in your area and get great discounts. Music is all around us, and Everyday we encounter different kinds of music, according to http://www.blogcatalog.com/blogs/music-and-life-1.html. Music is a great way to get people involveld and to bring people together. We should all care about what we eat and what it can do to our bodies. We wouldnt want to be overwieght and unhealthy.

3.)Why we should discuss the topic?

I beleive the class should discuss travling so that we can all get to know where we want to go to, and then maybe write about that place's culture and food(being a culinary student food is definitely one of my main reasons to travel.) Music is a topic that everyone would love to talk about, i mean who doesnt love music? The class can discuss about how music helps them study or how different types of music makes everyone feel. According to http://blog.nutritiondata.com/, a change in diet only really improves health. So we can discuss how the foods that we eat can improve our health, and what we can do to change how we eat to live a healthy life.


http://blog.artsusa.org/
http://www.mint.com/blog/finance-core/why-you-should-travel-now/
http://www.blogcatalog.com/blogs/music-and-life-1.html.
http://blog.nutritiondata.com/